What do you think? This is for a novel.?

Tis 11 yr old girl, named lily. She was kidnapped when she was 6 by an evil(i guess u could call it that) man named paul who fell in love with her virgin mother, named emily. He erases her memories and when commanded kills her mother.


A year later, he raised her. He becomes cruel to others if his servants dont meet his expectations, if he has no use for someone he kills them. He treats Lily cruelly, but compared to Paul%26#039;s other servants, it was alot less. But despite the cruely, she actually shows alot of affection for him. She calls him her master. She loves him quite alot. She does everything Paul says without arguing. Much like a dog. But Paul seems to be very indifferent to her affection.





Paul calls her, his pet. his toy, weapon etc. He explois her to kill innocent people with her telekinesis. She is much like a dog.(makes sense?)





After that Paul was arrested, I forgot da charge. What was he charged for?





What is your opinion on this little girl and the man? Why?


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And mothers can be virgin, there was a practice on that in India. Where they place the fetus into the mother, or the male sell sperm for a great deal of money, and doctors place the sperm in the female





artifical insemination


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the little girl is doing all she knows how to do. she was taught to make him her god. its the only person who gave her attention even if it was bad . this was her care taker in more ways then one. she knows nothing else. she will need help for the rest of her life.her thoughts and life have been controlled for her. she wont even know what to do without being told. she was totally controlled.

What do you think? This is for a novel.?
It doesn%26#039;t make sense that Paul would make Lily kill Emily if he loved her.


Other than that, it sounds like a typical, psychological/criminal, horror story.


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Reply:Sounds like just another excuse to write something about women that%26#039;s demeaning and hateful. The sad thing is that this also hurts men who could be having rewarding relationships if it wasn%26#039;t for all this negativity holding them back. This type of novel isn%26#039;t something I would go for or recommend to anyone.
Reply:Sounds like it has a shaky plot.





I wouldn%26#039;t read it.
Reply:Overblown and unrealistic.



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