A type of poem i don't usually write. I hope you all like it.?

%26quot;spring blooms%26quot;








Winter%26#039;s seemed to pass me by,


it%26#039;s disappeared, I blinked my eye.


All the doom and all the gloom,


I%26#039;m glad it%26#039;s over, none to soon.





Spring has sprung up all around,


birds and bees, a lovely sound.


My mood has changed, oh so bright,


all the colors, command my sight.





The chill of Old Man Winters gone,


he hung around me way too long.


I thought he%26#039;d got the best of me,


but I%26#039;m still standing, feeling free.





Spring it comes, just once a year,


but it%26#039;s reason is quite clear.


Krokus, lilies, all sublime,


love%26#039;s in the air, now is the time.

A type of poem i don%26#039;t usually write. I hope you all like it.?
its perfect! and its pleasently cheery!
Reply:A light, refreshing poem. I hope this mood will continue for you.
Reply:I am glad Winter is over and done with. Good riddance. It is now time to acquiesce and let Spring enter.
Reply:Well done, good rhythm and rhyme and subject matter. Light and pleasant. You should do more of this style, you are good at it.
Reply:it%26#039;s REALLY nice..............must have taken you a long time to think it through........keep writing ....your VERY good ♥
Reply:freshening... keep it up...
Reply:Very pleasant. You did a nice 180. I enjoyed it.
Reply:this is very beautiful, and a refreshing change!!!!!! all of your work is wonderful, you are incredibly talented.
Reply:Totally enlightening my friend, uplifting and quite the breath of fresh air%26lt;3





This is perfect, I%26#039;m so very excited I had the chance to read it *^_^*








You nailed this%26#039;n DP!
Reply:Its good. Better than anything i could write!!!!!!!
Reply:im not sure i really liked it but i know i liked the third ...i think the word is stanza
Reply:That%26#039;s a funny spelling of Crocus - seriously, is it the way American%26#039;s spell it?





I%26#039;m afraid your poem was a little bit too neat and tidy, and dare I say bland? All the sentiments expressed have been recorded before, and there isn%26#039;t much there to excite the senses.





The second verse reminds me of an old verse a work colleague always used to recite with the coming of Spring


no idea where it is from





Spring has sprung


The sap has ris


I wonder where the birdies is?
Reply:Wow,way to take a risk by writing a new style! It sure


payed of because i thought it was superb!


♥
Reply:I enjoy the happy/lighter side of you.


It was great.
Reply:wow. this really is different! i hope this is how you really feel. it has a really nice message to it and it%26#039;s a really beautiful thing to read.
Reply:I like the fact that you are branching out to try new ideas. This flows well, just needs better imagery. Watch the cliches also, they will detract from anybody%26#039;s poem. Spelling check: crocus and lillies. Overall, not bad. Your timing is impeccable though, it is snowing here today!
Reply:feeling better?? This is pleasently cheery.. just like dragonflyy said. xoxo
Reply:sweet!! love it!! it reminds me of young love in spring. =) so romantic yet still gentle and sort of outdoorsy. nice job! =)



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