Reword thesis?

for my essay, the first sentence of my conclusion is supposed to be a creative rewording of my thesis....





i am having difficulties coming up with this sentence.


my thesis is:


Since Lily was abused at an early age for many years, the abuse she bears can be seen clearly in how she acts.





any suggetions?

Reword thesis?
Lucy%26#039;s current reprehensible behavior--her frequent spitting in her mother%26#039;s face, her tantrums, her swearing--reflect an upbringing in which she was seduced by her brother and repeatedly struck by her father.


(You%26#039;ll change the facts of course; the point is, add some juicy details to support your concept.)
Reply:In Lilies personality and actions you can clearly feel her pain, and in which you know she could have been abused.
Reply:In conclusion, Lilies behavior can be directly attributed to the way she acts.
Reply:lilys actions clearly show how she was abused for multiple years



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