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i was thinking about starting the first chaptor of my book with dialogue.is this a good idea?i've never read any books that start like that.





i'm starting it with:





"I can't believe your doing this!" i shouted angrily.





"Lily you have to understand, she makes me happy." My father pleaded.





the story is about a girls father dating for the first time since her parents' divorce 7 years ago.do you have any ideas on what to put on the cover?

I have this idea?
I have read several books that begin with a dialogue, and it can be a great attention grabber. The key is to make it interesting, but not overly confusing. The reader should want to read on in order to understand, but they shouldn't get frustrated with too many new, crazy things right away. Good luck!!
Reply:Don't worry about the cover or title until your done. Oh, and dialogue works better for some people better than others. I like it because it helps start off with action and get right into the story. It sucks the reader in and then you can explain the situation later. In your case it introduces the problem in the story right away.
Reply:I often start stories and chapters like that. I find it grips readers. It's also easier for your readers to get involved with it than starting off with a tedious paragraph. Just a note, there should be a comma after Lily.
Reply:No clue,but i think your Dialoge needs more details. =] But it's a great beginning though.





You could put A girl,Woman,and a man repesenting the charaters.



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