Help me with my yugioh deck!!?

I enter a tournament every week and I want to win once at least. Everyone there is older then me, at least 4 years. I need help with my deck.





Tributes


Jinzo x2


Thesalos the firestorm monarch x2


Cyber dragon x3





4 star or less


Hydrogeddon x3


Exiled force x3


Neospacian grand mole


DD warrior lady


treborn frog


sangan


marauding captain


morphing jar


spirit reaper


injection farie lily


snipe hunter





Spells


Nobleman of crossout


mystical space typhoon


soul exchange


smashing ground


book of moon


shrink


premature burrial


pot of avarice


scapegoat


lightning vortex


heavy storm


brain control





Traps


Sakuretsu armour x3


bottomless trap hole


call of the haunted


Torrential tribute





Thats about it, thanks

Help me with my yugioh deck!!?
↑This IS a pretty darn good deck, I don't know what these other fellas are talking about...↑





There are some changes you could consider though.





I'd take out a single copy of exiled force- three is just too many...


also


-1 marauding captain


-1 morphing jar


+3 giant rat


These rats should work well in here, as they can search your exiled forces, neo spacian grand mole, and perhaps most importantly injection fairy lily.





-1 snipe


+1 injection





I'm assuming you don't have mirror force, but when you get one, take out a single sakuretsu.





Hope this helps
Reply:where is your mirror force?
Reply:pretty good i guess. maybe you can put in another marauding captain and replace book of moon with tsukiyomi.
Reply:get rid of one thesalosand one jinzo





add-


magic cylinder


mirror force


cyber dragon fusions


spell cards used for fusion summons


beat-down monsters (4 star monsters with 1900 atk or more)


man-eater bug
Reply:i agree tyhis is a pretty gud deck and u should take out one sak for mirror force but u can also take out the fire storm monarch and add in molbius and take out marauding captain and add in another injection fary lily
Reply:you can't win without great attack monster put zarbog the thunder moarch, cyber dragon fusions, use ritual cards for better attack like dark master zork, spell and trap jammer, magic cylinder. enemy controller, put luster dragon for 1900 attack with only 4 level,
Reply:Run This





"LILLY OTK"





20 monsters





3 cyber dragon


3 nimble momango


2 jinzo


2 giant rat


2 Inj . Fai . lilly


1 dd warrior lady


1 mof


1 breaker


1 treborn frog


1 N.S. grand mole


1 spirit reaper


1 sangan


1 snipe hunter





14 spells





2 noc


2 enemny controller


2 pot of averiace


1 heavy storm


1 mst


1 premature burial


1 scapegoat


1 book of moon


1 smashing ground


1 fissure


1 brain control





6 traps





3 sak armor


1 mirror force


1 trontile tribute


1 ceasefire



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